Bosque Sunset, Bosque del Apache NWR, NM, Nov. 2011 |
I saw right away that this photo in its raw form was kind of flat; the composition was okay, the detail was pretty good but not good enough to zoom in (have I mentioned that I'm dying for a fast telephoto lens? Next year, perhaps), and the color was good but not striking enough to carry the image. So I applied Photoshop's black-and-white filter, which was okay but not fabulous (I do much prefer color to B/W -- my own visual bias), and then slowly ramped the color back up and added sepia and selenium toning (using Topaz Labs' new B&W Effects, which is a fun and fabulous Photoshop add-in) to "antique" the image. This seemed to bring out the snow geese, which helped me realize that I didn't really have one stand-out focal element in this image -- oh, pretty birds! oh, pretty trees! oh, cool lines! -- and that perhaps this is what I struggle with most in landscapes.
So, food for thought. Please feel free to offer whatever feedback you have on this image; it's definitely a work in progress. I'm really enjoying the process of experimenting and letting go of the idea that I have to create a "perfect" image, and I'm open to suggestions and inspiration.
3 comments:
I'm no expert on tone . . . I say have fun experimenting and listen to that inner voice. :0)
Nice shot, Anna. I seem to have some of the same troubles with landscape (paintings) as you express about your photography. I find the bright whiteness of the snow geese distracting and there are so many of them I do not focus on any of them. The trees are what really draw my eye and the rest is support for them. I agree with Kathryn, though, trust your inner voice.
I think it's fun to experiment with different techniques. I find that while I might like a photo to begin with, after a few attempts at editing, I discard it and start with another. Wasn't meant to be.
I like the painterly effect on this very much.
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